This game is amazing, and all the more impressive being a first time work. Your writing captures Eleanor's Anhedonia really well, along with the emotions that come up in the later scenes as well. I feel like it's a good subversion of the whole "Getting swept off your feet by a scary outlaw" trope in the best way possible. Keep up the good work! I really hope you make more games, seriously.

It's great! It feels like you tried to make something that only you could make. Margo's world is quite fascinating...

I've never read toxic yuri, but I found myself... smiling whenever Claire was on screen. I wonder if this unlocked something in me.... Eleanor's commentary about other people had me staring at my hands and at myself in the mirror for a bit, as someone who's always wondering "Am I the boring one?" Great writing, and I loved the character's facial expressions. Very cool work!

I can’t believe this is a debut game. I immediately entered Eleanor’s worldview the second the game started. Her narration is intoxicating, and I’ve always liked games with this kind of somber atmosphere.

And the amount of CGs is pretty crazy. The art is so captivating. Unbelievable work.

Wonderful writing, keen eye for detail (both in words and art), and lots of interesting possible interpretations to dig into. A game that I think may terrify and tantalize the kind of people who hate their life but fear changing would shatter what small comforts they do have and require looking at themselves. (Speaking from experience.)

At times felt at ease from the familiarity of Eleanor's thought process, at times felt ill from Everything Happening All The Time, but at no point was I... bored. Haha.

A game that will stick with me for a long time.

This was fantastic, I really enjoyed it. You have a great talent as a writer and an artist.   

I just finished this after your stream today. Wow! I was enthralled and lead along by Eleanor's characterization. I loved how the scene started with the baggy clothes mention, relatable to things I've known in my past. Felt that. Loved the art on Eleanor! I won't get too detailed with what i liked (you can ask me if that opinion at all matters) but i liked it :) you should totallllllly make more!

Eleanor is a great character. The neurotic conjuring of every possible (well, possible is a stretch) scenario, but the total lack of initiative to act on a single one of them... unless? :9 It's great. 

Writing was visceral, color palette was evocative, art and design were clean and prompted the imagination. Nice job taking on some of the music, too. I really liked this! 

woah... it's like two games in one and both of them are extremely good and stick in your brain for a long time. office mundanity is just as scary as murder, really

Wao… romantic!

I just finished reading and I really loved this! It says a lot about me, but a lot of Eleanor's thoughts resonated with mine, particularly the feeling of not being a misanthrope but just finding People tiring. 

That aside, I personally think the two of them are very cutely messed up together. I love the concept of violence and intimacy being mixed together, and the sex scene really scratches that itch for me. I think Milk Puzzle is a very strong contender. Good luck to you with the Game Jam!<3333

a knot formed in the pit of my stomach from the very start of the game and i was unable to look away for the entire duration

Oughh that was great... the aesthetics and atmosphere were on point (the dream sequence was especially striking). Really neat VN !! I'll think of it for a while truly

awesome violence and awesome sex. it briefly made me feel ill and the aesthetics went hard. quality stuff. 

I feel like an intruder writing a comment for this game, but: Some of Eleanor's internal dialogue lines about loneliness and dealing with a work life that grows duller and duller by the day are going to stick with me for a while. I was not expecting that from a game jam game and I am not exactly sure what to make of it, but it does shows how good you are at conveying feeling.

Good luck with the jam, this is an impressive amount of work for a month and half game. This was really good, I think you have a shot.

That was super good!! While it's not the kind of story i'd usually indulge in, I ended up enjoying it a bunch.

It's really able to put you in the shoes of eleanor and be in that reality for a bit, great job

literally so good

i really liked all the art and character designs, love when fucked up girlies find each other <3